I had to actually stop what I was doing to critique this, I just couldn't pass it up. Heliosis is just epic, I mean EPIC, ladies and gentlemen!
Talk about a sci-fier's wet dream. I love the detail that went into the lighting storms on the lower planet, and how Earth-like the center one is, with a Jupiter-like feel about it with the rings. The rest of the universe behind the two planets seems to be forgotten, like they're stealing the whole show. And that's just the view from above. A sci-fier could put Pandora to shame with what he or she could come up with on the surfaces' of both of these planets.
The originality is the only thing that slightly suffers in this work, but I do mean only slightly.
Great work, *Tr1umph